Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In today's life, education and work opportunities are vast and available. Although early age which define and students have options to click but they have to be away from home which could give both positive and negative output. Some people believe as myriad benefits by educating them away from home and other group of people argue it leads to lethal consequences. This essay will discuss both views by analyzing this arguments and provide the logical conclusion.
To start with, there are preponderant advantages if children pursue his education from home. One of them is level of concentration to grasping the knowledge which leads to proficient pinnacle. For example, away from parents, just need concentration on study. Firstly, he faces challenges which is indirectly benefits which would nurture with management. Secondly, he may get courage and gregarious which would engulf him preparedness for imminent future.
On contrary, people believe children away from parents may cause negative influences. There will be lack of tenderness and affection in school boarding students. People mention that children study and some they need to work to complete their day to day expenses. For example part-time job such as salesman, newspaper distributes etc. Students fallen in this circumstances mainly degrade their performance and result in low examination output.
In recapitulate, this essay discuss both negative and positive of study or work in another city, in my personal opinion working or studying away from parents give ample opportunities to grow as individual. The advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I will recommend pupil in early age should obey their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45769230769 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88356647596 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3789163969 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198741294273 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578064082383 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393663122008 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122310444077 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321745301961 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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