In this and age, for some people, a good holiday is spending time in a convenient and fun place or country, other group interested to travel to the places with different nations and learn about their living style. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss how far I agree with travel to see nations and historic places.
To begin with, there are various reasons for traveling through the country to see ancient communities and places. At first, In every country, there are variant people with diverse foods and clothes and also their own accent. In some of the communities, you can live among them awhile and experience their living style. For example, in Iran, there are many clans in different parts of the country such as Lor, Kurd, Qashqai and agreed with tourists to live among them and do their daily works like shepherds. This kind of journey is cheep and charm.
Secondly, for those travelers who like to see the other countries, go to historic countries with ancient places and cities and learn about their past empire can make a dreamy holiday. For instance, Pizza Tower and Venice in Italy are ancient places that attract many tourists from all around the world every year.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling debates on both sides, my personal sentiment is that travel to see people traditions and living style and also historic countries make a good holiday for us.
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also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81742738589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28800458101 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6753202133 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288327572251 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113168041332 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552360030485 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178365914334 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280654352 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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