Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In this day and age, spending too much time at work to the extent that made people busy and they have not enough time for their personal life. Although today, it is hard to escape from this phenomenon, people are losing their best times of life by working a lot. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this statement as a right view. At first, although people work to fulfill their living for well-being, by working until a late time they will hardly have free time for personal life. they would be involved in a uniform life and depression. For example, late coming to the house in every day due to hard working is the sign of
uniform life and having no time for spirit recovery.
In addition, while people work too much to make better future for their family, it makes them away from their families. they can not spend a lot of time with their children in the family. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTW Univesity researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of school children complain of their busy parents.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, my personal sentiment is that spending too much time at work brings many issues for personal living in the people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6906779661 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37143948323 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3618257674 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527585488251 0.242375264174 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215922012519 0.0925447433944 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106384326153 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30482452415 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113529467435 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.