In this days, in the opinion of some people, education is aiming to future skilled workers and proper members of society. the other people think to fulfill people's life is the purpose of education. the better workforces and best society can be the aim of education. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some advantages of education.
To began with,there are various reasons to support education to create workforce and good members of society. Although the new graduated workers have no enough practical experience, they gained all the knowledge of their career. they can get many experinces after a time working as an apprentice. For example, when I started my job, I passed some practical classes and workshops to relate more to my position.
In addition, the earning of educated people is not very high like businessmen, but they can be positive people in any society. During education, they learn to be influential to develop the society without crimes. For instance, a recent research conducted by NSE University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of crimes done by the people who they did not
educated or have not been the educated parents.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the advantages of education, in my personal viewpoint, although education maybe does not brings high income with itself, it can create best workers and succeeded people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12987012987 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75704902307 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3784974479 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293718981167 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109475526737 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113225831572 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161210728872 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899195292058 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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