Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, watching TV has become more popular. Some people believe that TV is a useful tool which enables people to receive news faster and a rich source of information, while others argue that television has changed people behavior and they are doing less physical activities rather than the past. This essay will discuss the reasons why the television invention has a positive impact on people lives and is a great source of knowledge where it has become very important in humans lives.
Nowadays, people spend longer hours on watching television, which shows different types of programs. These programs include news, documentary movies and films, these are very useful in improving human literature and awareness. Recent study, which was conducted in the Cambridge university, has shown that 96% of American people spend more that 7 hours on watching television programs, and this enables them to improve their creativity and awareness. Therefore, it seems clear that watching television has become one of the most popular activity of human lives and it enhances people characteristics.
On the other hand, some people think that with the invention of other technologies, such as, computers and PlayStation, people spend less hours on watching TV than they were in the past. People prefer playing games rather than watching movies. Recent study, which was conducted in Washington university, has shown that the number of hours spending on watching television has reduced significantly from 8 hours per day to 4 hours per day. But these people do not
know that there are a lot of people do not own computers or the internet facility. Thus, TV is crucial in people lives and a lot of people consider it as the major source of knowledge and news.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why TV is essential in these days. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that television has spread widely and it is very important in people lives than it was in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...computers and PlayStation, people spend less hours on watching TV than they were in the pa...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...computers and PlayStation, people spend less hours on watching TV than they were in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 334.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02395209581 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67047071114 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48502994012 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5232930132 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770322185837 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034922290921 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308269565483 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056444906132 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318158908972 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.