OF all the Fortune 500 companies, only 4% have female CEOs. The government should change the policy so that women make up an equal 50% of executed business positions.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
The studying of the Fortune 500 companies has shown, that since the beginning of the 21st century,
the number of female COEs has only increased up to 4% of the total number. Some people believe that governments should legislate new laws which oblige companies to hire more women at the positions of executed business positions, and the percentage must equal to 50%, while others argue that this issue relates to the companies polices, and governments do not have the right to force companies to change their polices. This essay will discuss the reasons why the governments should regulate new laws which aim increasing numbers of women at the CEO positions.
The governments should oblige companies to hire more women at the CEOs positions because women own equal rights to men. These days women have shown their abilities to occupy leader positions, they compete men with their knowledge and their performance. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 99% of women have achieved their tasks better than men. Therefore, governments have to impose a new law which oblige companies to hire more women at the CEOs positions.
On the other hand, some people argue that women are not suitable for higher positions at companies and consequently governments should not oblige companies to hire more women at executed business positions because their characters are not similar to men. Men are more tough at difficult situation rather than women. Recent research, which was conducted in Jordan, has shown that men decisions are more accurate than women decisions at difficult situations. These people are unaware of the fact that not all women are the same, and there women more tough than men. Thus, it seems clear that women have the right to work equally to men at the higher positions in the big companies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why governments should force companies to hire more women at the executed business positions. In my opinion, I believe that women have proofed their capabilities of doing difficult tasks under difficult situations, and they have succeed, so government should oblige companies to change their policies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...der difficult situations, and they have succeed, so government should oblige companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1207.87684729 151% => OK
No of words: 353.0 242.827586207 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15297450425 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56555270572 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42492917847 0.580463131201 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 379.143842365 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2904637547 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.928571429 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225544301124 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102472706024 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557761925382 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148498680269 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661032120823 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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