Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

One of the conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that TV is an essential part of life. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. I do completely believe in this and this essay will elucidate some reasons for the same.

There are innumerable arguments in favor of my stance. More preponderant one is that television is the most influential invention in the history of mankind. And it acts as an unlimited source of entertainment, news, knowledge, and advertisements showing aspects of our lives. Channels feature content involving nature, science, culture and history along with other entertainment programs. With their cognitive learning programs, they broaden the horizon of people especially students. Research states that children learn better with visual effects and television can act as a good medium for such education. In addition, news channels keep you updated with current happenings and events across the globe. To cite an example on this matter, Syria civil war, live updates of Presidential elections.

On the other hand, some people adopt an opposite view and tend to believe that people are addicted to television. This is the undeniable fact that they become more obsessed with television by spending long hours in front of it. It might show adverse effects on productivity and thought process.

Agglomerating all the points above, I incline to believe that TV plays a vital role in everyone's life and one can get its fruitful benefits if used wisely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. I do completely believe in this a...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ts. Research states that children learn better with visual effects and television can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12840466926 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83343300505 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63813229572 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0950194262 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20278889558 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571001517606 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051321573686 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11105100459 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606181107679 0.0609392437508 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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