numerous prefer more fast food and snacks.
The problem of numerous prefer more fast food and snacks which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that in many countries people ate various type of fast food which is not good for their health. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is it leads to various problem because it lead to obesity which is not good for their health. they become not able to do work properly. and they also face many problems in their life. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but accessible and practicable is it has many effects on their health and they face many problem in their life which also are not beneficial for them. Primarily, government parents should take the responsibility of their child they should eat the food of their children which is made at home.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of fast food can be successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96958174905 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57468640919 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532319391635 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8684446424 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147830038987 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538370213317 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930811886874 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965097711651 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744872201256 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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