Online shopping is destroying local business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement. Support your views with reasons and examples.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that online shopping destroy local business and I agree with this no doubt there are many drawbacks of online shopping like people do fraud through online shopping. Another disadvantage is that it lacks the experience of shopping in people but there are many benefits of online shopping. There is a widespread worry that this only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I donot entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one that online shopping effect local business and offer numberous other benefits in various fields. Online shopping provide benefits as it saves our time and efforts. It provides good discounts and lower prices and we can buy anything by staying at our place, Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by the online shopping, not only can one benefit more when its come to being effective but they can also enhance the productivity and standard of life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proportion is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system , can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. However, it is apparent that why many are in favour of the online shopping.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, the advantages of online shopping are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95622895623 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69355875602 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0061388177 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280505659887 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100837757978 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986452065179 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17423203085 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104194315245 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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