Online shopping is destroying local businesses.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experiences or observations.
In past, people go to shop usually and purchase the grocery, clothes and many more stuff but in today's modern world, it is changing now and people usually order online . Some people believe that online shopping is deteriorating the local shops sales and others people think accept online shopping as they get variety and designs. This essay will discuss the pros and cons and hence ,will give conclusion.
Primary, Online shopping provides numerous advantages and overweigh the disadvantages. It gives us flexibility for access and variety in design and quality. In addition, it segregates these categories with price whereas Local shops do not provide this facility. People can refine their choice and order it online with just a electronic devices. No human communication while processing their request happens. Online shopping not only provides these benefits but it saves time of individual. For example people work in office and can select their product from office itself. Online shopping provides multifarious categories brand and accepts digital money and play a pivotal role in growth of nation.
Secondly, Despite of advantages, it has some limitations as well. Some customer order only and doesn't receive their product in delivery time. E trader gives reason and negotiates in terms of conditions. In additions, some customer's money debited but they do not get money and product. Whereas people goes to local shops, get their product easily with cash transaction. Local shopkeeper believe and trust you while shopping as physical interaction happens. Online shopping doesn't provide these features.
In recapitulate, Online shopping delivers aforementioned advantages and disadvantages. I would suggest, online shopping provides much flexibility with soft money in terms of digital money and boost digital economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 8.36945812808 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.525 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73515269597 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.101286147 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.35 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283428228357 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901933253136 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705455332232 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187501430265 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414563377049 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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