The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce the traffic congestion and pollution.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the use of one car per family. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the society. In my opinion, one car per family have more positive impacts in the society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant drawbacks of one car per family is the less independence of the family members. For example, when all the family use the same car could be difficult manage te time to everyone.
On the another hand, there are certain arguments in favour of my stance, one of the most preponderant one is that use the only car at home has positive impacts for the community in various ways. Firstly Save money because all the family spend less in fuel. According to "times Magazine December 2019 edition",the portion of expenses has dropped from 30 percent to 10 percent today. Secondly, the environmental impact has reducing about this.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impact of one car per family. The best option is manage te schedule of every people at home when every one can use the car in specific hours.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of one car per family in the society is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67984189723 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63213211735 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.442362878 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28142758016 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10906943041 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757417121483 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173885957837 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584041821861 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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