Painting and craft relaxes the mind but its understanding is not common . discuss the ways of its promotion.
The sustainable development of the fact that painting and craft brings relaxation of mind has sparked the controversy over the impact on recent years. Handcrafts, art and craft are the base of every place and preserving them is very crucial.I agree to the statement that paintings and craft distresses the mind but people are less aware of its benefits.
To begin with, art and craft are the unique symbol of every region and also it helps to know about the past events. Old scriptures and paintings helps in gaining knowledge about the ancestors and renowned discoveries made. Adding to it, signs used in making any form of art can help in maintaining the confidentiality so it can serve as a messenger and help solve many disputes. Furthermore, the natural combination of colors brings in the soothing impact on the eyes of viewer. Besides this, beauty lies in the eye of beholder yet the happiness gained on having glance over colored pictures is undeniable.
Adding to it, colors help in connecting people so everyone should realize the importance of artistry and at initial levels schools must have additional classes for arts for the interested candidates. Illustrating further, child can develop and know about his or her talent only if the exposure is given. Moreover, every talent can become a profession now days. Hence, it can be the source of income for the deserving candidates. government should provide special facilities to enhance the creativity of each individual because we know everyone deserves a chance to gain and develop the inbuilt talents.
Conclusively, painting and crafts helps to form a career and have a happy living. so it should be considered as important as the medical and engineering. government should open museums, art galleries and hold exhibitions to promote the art and crafts and schools should also have frequent trips to these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08387096774 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79352603731 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3482328456 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155384859229 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491261173794 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066676757153 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111291694067 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996011442094 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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