It is undeniable that ,parents have major role in children's life and their behavior.I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
To begin with,family is the first school for every children.To make it clear ,children starts to learn from home and from the family members.For instance ,when children start to speak they always follow the parents .In other words they speak the same language of their guardians.Moreover, parents are role model of pupils.To justify,it has been noted that doctors children mostly wanted to become a doctor.Furthermore,a research conducted in a Juvenile home in India by a group of child psychologists shows that, the children who were in Juvenile home has had the history of broken family or family history of antisocial behavior.So its true that parents are the first teachers.
However,other factors are also contribute to bring good conduct among children.These includes,peer group influence,good academic ambiance and so on.Mainly educational institution plays a crucial role to teach discipline to the students.It is certainly true that education improves the quality of life .People who are better educated have a better life.
In conclusion,I totally agree that parents have immense role to bring a good behavior among children.This is because parents are first teachers and role model of children.I have also a perception that ,peer group influence and good educational background also beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4632034632 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19220556137 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.5024630542 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.053939712 50.4703680194 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.5 104.977214359 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.75 20.9669160288 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.25397266985 400% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.33497536946 581% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207702266779 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133528303853 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654907043128 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133528303853 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654907043128 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 12.6369458128 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 53.1260098522 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.9458128079 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.3980295567 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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