Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Capital punishment is always associated with ignorance and intolerance. Presently a proportion of people believe that death penalty is good for a nation. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay, i will state the reasons for my view.
To begin with, execution is completely related to crime related offenses. It is undisputable fact that human life is precious and imperative. Moreover, the death penalty is an effective deterrent to serious crime and also warning to the public that if anyone commits a crime they will go through the same penalty. Therefore people might be afraid to do such crime.It will help the people to lead calm and peaceful lie in the community.
Another reason for my view is that the government will be able to spend less money on keeping the criminal in the prison. In other words, if the criminal is jailed for long years the government should afford the expenses for the prisoner and also salaries for the jail officers. If a person it means that he has less tolerance and he is not at all fit for the society to lead a good life. So it is justified that these types of people better to be treated with a death warrant.
In conclusion, death penalty is one of the best judicial for the criminals. It helps the individual to warn away from criminal offenses as well as helps the government in terms of financial savings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69709543568 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5998888796 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9672539553 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0769230769 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164353728213 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569178260684 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485556634494 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966342908563 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063522743797 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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