Parents should be held legally responsible for the children’s act what is your opinion.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether parents should be legally responsible for children’s act can lead to thought-provoking discussion. My viewpoint is that irrespective of the numerous argument that exists, it is the only parents who responsible for children’s act.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that parenting plays a focal role in children’s upbringing. This is because they are the first mentor of the children. It is important to know that children absorb and imitate from his parent and surrounding. It can also be observed that children spend most of the time at home and learn the language, culture, rituals, and many more things from their parents only.
There are a few aspects of parenting that needed special mentioning. Firstly, it is said that parenting not only encompasses taking care of the children but also making them accountable for their mistakes. For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a failure as a father for his son’s drug addiction and expresses the regret of the public.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments and hence my opinion is that parents are the only responsible for the children’s act. I am inclined to believe that the parents are solely and legally responsible for the children’s act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
...ent that exists, it is the only parents who responsible for children's act. There are a n...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
.... For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponsible for the children's act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17154811715 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21082751804 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560669456067 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2593487408 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469268476604 0.242375264174 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171992200909 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127117373823 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304176929503 0.151781067708 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133517939325 0.0609392437508 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.