What do you see as the main advantages and disadvantages of undertaking studies in a foreign country?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether undertaking studies in a foreign country can lead to thought-provoking discussion. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, a person can learn many things such as a foreign language, rituals, and many more things while studying in a foreign country. In this essay, I shall present my point of view and calculation.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that a person cannot only learn the rituals, customs, but he can also learn the language of the country, so there is automatically change in his personality and attitude. It can also be observed that while studying abroad, he needs to earn the money for his daily expenses, and for paying the fees of his college, so in this way he became independent. Thus, the benefits of studying abroad are rightly justified.
As there are two sides of every coin, in the same way, there are also the negative points of studying in abroad. Firstly, the children are in another country, so there is no one there who can look over them, so there are chances that they may go in the other direction instead of studying such as consuming liquor and other things which are very harmful to our health. Thus, the negative points of studying abroad are truly justified.
Thus, from the above points, we can reach the conclusion that studying abroad is good for the overall personality development of a person, but not at the cost of his health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son, but not at the cost of his health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, thus, while, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77289377289 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74496608132 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5555816006 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111652308612 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460155287106 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435698696381 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681804154761 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453743867852 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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