Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Actions of a child are true manifestation of parent’s teaching. Some people think that parents should be held legally responsible for their childs actions, while others maintain that children’s themselves are to be accountable for their every deed. This essay will discuss that why parents are required to held answerable for their children’s actions.
Firstly, there are myriad of arguments in favour of parents being legally accountable for their children’s act. To begin with, parents being the closet have the prime responsibility to teach their children’s best moral and high character values. Moreover, children at times commit such unpredictable actions which are unacceptable and prove to be harmful for the society. As a matter of fact, parents unable to groom their children’s are required to be held legally responsible for any bad deed or action of their child.
Furthermore, children are like sponge and they abosrb everything from their parents. Hence, parents are not only requried to fulfill the basic needs of their kids but also hold a primary obligation to teach discipline and social values. As an example, Jackie Chan the great actor publically confessed the use of drugs by his son and accepted that he has not proved to be a good father. Resultantly, parents every action holds a great impact on their child and thus should be held responsible for their children’s every deed.
In conclusion, foregoing discussion purporates plausible arguments that parents should be held legally accountable for their children’s action. However, I opine that by virtue of responsibility bestowed on parents should impart social and disclipnied values to their children’s and be held responsible for every action of their kid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponsible for every action of their kid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50909090909 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19787946268 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6422118266 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463965399959 0.242375264174 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221417430816 0.0925447433944 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131137120403 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364699412918 0.151781067708 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919763093826 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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