Parents should be held legally responsible for children's act. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of legislating laws for parents in order to enhance their responsibility for their children's actions and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although these rules can be beneficial as they are regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that this issue can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, the parental responsibilities for the youths' behaviour and controlling them by legislations can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of modern upbringing. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, it is not fair that only adolescents will punish for their actions without the influence of their parental upbringing. A considerable amount of crime will not be occurred, if parents did their duties about their children. The youths' attitudes, tendencies, opinions and actions formed by their parental beliefs. Hence, parents have commitement in this case.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of parental responsibilities of their children's activities has some opponents. They asserted that this decision can diminish the independent personality and juveniles' behaviour entirely depends on their parents. They argue that the schools, parents and nations should educate them and encourage them to accept their behavioural consequences.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of legislating rules for enhancing the parental responsibilities for children's actions are far more outweigh their demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
..., the parental responsibilities for the youths behaviour and controlling them by legis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68518518519 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1857040921 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5773855681 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225384597006 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855248898086 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520226182445 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147693720865 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233689704138 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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