Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
In recent years, the phenomenon of parent’s responsibility for their children’s acts has sparked a hot debate that leads to questions of liability of parents towards their child. Some people considered that parents should hold full responsibility for children’s behavior while others think that there is no relation between children’s activity and parent’s responsibility. In my opinion, I believe parents are responsible for children’s action and the following essay will justify my viewpoint.
Firstly, children’s action is heavily shaped by their parent’s behavior towards them in the early years. Kids easily learn by replicating what they see and hear at home. For kids having parents with aggressive and violent behaviors, they often act aggressively and become moody easily. Years later, they can grow up joining criminal activities, gambling, drinking or smoking as they often don’t get the attention they want at home.
Secondly, since kids spent most of their time at home, parents have the responsibility to guide and teach them, including choosing the appropriate TV programs, teaching them the moral values, and protecting them from dangers. If they are not treated correctly, they can easily be influenced by the negative actions presented in everyday life. In a loving family, adults teach their children with good deeds and help them achieve their desire goals in life.
Overall, I believe that parents are accountable for children’s acts as they are the role model. It is their responsibility to guide, teach and raise their kids into greater citizens for our future nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.612 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19481830469 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8447713001 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331792691147 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133850947103 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825196866395 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208777324941 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946055452466 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.