Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.

In recent years, the phenomenon of the parent’s responsibility for their children’s acts have sparked the controversy which lead to the question of liability of parents towards their child. Considering this, there are some analysts who hold an opinion that parents are solely responsible for children’s behaviour, while others opine that there is no relation between the child’s activity and parent’s responsibility. In this essay, I will discuss myriad aspects for the same.

To commence with, kids are like tiny flowers which should be handled with care. I believe that children’s career and character is shaped by their parent’s behaviour towards them. Young juvenile replicates the act or words what they hear or see at home. For example, aggressive parents who are fighting at home attributes to stubborn and aggressive kid. Since he don’t get attention at home, he tries to make friends at his school and if he may get bad company, they indulge in wrong habits such as crime activities, smoking consumption of alcohol and so on.

Furthermore, the most conspicuous reason is that these blooming buds spent more than half of the time at home. So, it is the parent’s responsibility to shape their kid in well-mannered way. A loving family gives moral values, principles and right path to attain successful life ahead by achieving the desired goal in life. Government also plays vital role in shaping the younger generation’s future. Federation should provide regular seminars and trainings for both parents and kids regarding the nurturing of the children.

To recapitulate the foregoing discussion, I am inclined to believe that teachers, parents and government are in a whole responsible for child’s act and to reduce the juvenile crime rates, legislation should incorporate stringent rules and laws.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arding the nurturing of the children. To recapitulate the foregoing discussion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48442906574 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22768937662 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6696880152 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317919381058 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107512858355 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848426138418 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186460022199 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630594742019 0.0609392437508 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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