Parents should be legally responsible for children's act/behavior. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of parents responsible and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by may that the matter of the pattern of behaviour is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by the substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the structure of behaviour can be a plus, I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, children's behaviour can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of children development, as well as childcare facilities, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered behavioural problems. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both the parent's behaviour and the deprived children apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, growing children might increase the consequences of the gifted child. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of violent behaviour could relate to this reality that the demerits of personal habits pertain to eating habits. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by the prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the abnormal behaviour is correlated negatively with misbehaviour. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of antisocial behaviour.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of dependent children far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the rules of parents prove the significance of child emotion, but also pinpoint polite behaviour implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...s, beneficial ramifications of both the parents behaviour and the deprived children app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70428015564 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22233496019 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2521366981 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100272931274 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379922749831 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420611880202 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593848050734 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270698385912 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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