Parents should held legally responsible for their children act, what’s your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of parents who are guiding their children in a proper way. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in children. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that parent should teach their children in proper manner so they can build some skills. Not only can parents help children to learn skills but it can also help children to play proper role in society. Needless to say, all these merits stand children in good stead as far as learning effectively is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that children cannot make decision properly so in order to show right path they need the accurate guidance from their parents. Besides, parents can teach children in various way from learning by doing to games and other activites. Hence, it is apparent why many are in fa our of legally responsible parents.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that benefits of legally responsible parents are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... parents who are guiding their children in a proper way. There is a widespread worry that this ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...hey can build some skills. Not only can parents help children to learn skills but it ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8932038835 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64794145133 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.216370351 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245192657043 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915253738486 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380861760247 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143465738996 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146165448705 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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