Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this ? Discuss with appropriate examples?
The most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the myriad of large shopping mall. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a number of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that large shopping malls help to uplift the economy of the country as well as family. In fact, Not only do people have easy access to all accessories but it also provide opportunity in employment sector.Needless to say, all these merits stand people in a good stead as far as convenient is concerned.
Another pivotal aspects of this argument is that it provides facilities to people which they can utilise and since extreme mall have all kinds of things so consumer don't have to go other place which save time and money. Besides, large shopping complex have huge area so that people can send their spare time. Hence, it is apparent why many a re in favour of large shopping malls.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of large shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, well, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6862745098 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5838681219 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8189674469 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173363022241 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799271226503 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391574006563 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111755486854 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394045330947 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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