In the past 100 years, path breaking inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers have changed the very concept of living. What do you think has been the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
In the past century, the era of inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers have significantly changed the way people live. In my own perspective, the greatest invention made and has been continuously developing today is the computer technology. This is justified by communication systems and improved security measures.
To begin with, the advent of unwavering research technology has come to help mankind in their way to convey messages. It is predominantly a tool for companies today in making business transactions. The birth of emails and other online means such as social media to communicate has went its way to share emotions and feelings of individuals. These can be illustrated by Facebook, Twitter, Yahoo and Google mails which are now the primary instrument to connect people even in far places at an instant time.
Apart from this, the fact that computers have high potential to be programmed the same with the brain of humans. Safe-guarding one\'s personal accounts and information provides protection for employers as well as employees even in the most unsafe environment. Security protections are also circumventing in computer applications that could tremendously would not cause harm or does not affect the user in terms of sharing private data and other essential information.
To recapitulate, the fact that the lives of people become easier and convenient when utilizing these resources is inevitable. It is indeed through this powerful patented mediums that could arouse its highest potential in order for the humans to communicate and be secured from private as well as public information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
...such as social media to communicate has went its way to share emotions and feelings ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09998449724 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643137254902 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6706303224 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132070057336 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047156929589 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073003490562 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826718442936 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872247294768 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.