In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and
computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last
100 years, medicine, science or technology?
A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue, whether which is greatest invention in last century. we will discuss all creations and I will give my opinion which holds more weight.
To begin with, in last 100 years there are lot inventions are created and one them is most iconic i.e computer. it has changed entirely world and the generated best of antibiotics, medicines, aircraft and many more inventions which are making luxuries life of people. In addition to above, computer plays a crucial role in, medical, air plane, ships, defense, satellite, banking and many more system. In fact we can say that entire world is catched. A relevant example is, billion of calculation it complete in fraction of second, it is helping in medical surgery, aircraft whole working on it. Another point which I feel is important to point out is that, after the primary need to human i.e. Food, Cloths, and Shelter the fourth is also most important that is computer.
I would say the top most creation of human being is ever created is computer as all system which are operational in today's universe are the part of it and backbone of it is technology.
In conclusion, it's my considered opinion is computer is the best invention of human being as it is reducing each and every task easy and hassle free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: completes
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.5418719212 218% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79735682819 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60225301971 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599118942731 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9454628212 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128874514567 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489836339911 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478093919694 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063620559674 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040808145331 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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