Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
A matter of cosiderable controversy at present is the issue whether music is important for primary school. As the music hold major space between each one of us, and we can't denay it all. Reference to this topic we will discuss both side of this contentious issue will be put under scrutiny in the essay below, and my opinion as to which holds more weight will be given.
To begin with, there are multiple aspects of music, and same has been proven by the traditional methods as well. Let's take an example, one of the NGO's had conducted survey, and the results were published. it has been observed that the more music student learn, and make habit of it, the more able to remember. In the modern era the new inventions are inventing on regularly, and each one of them's, motto is to make effortless life, while the music study is the same part of the new technology and which is proven. music subject is important in students life since it allows them to understand the types of music also help them to understand the our culture. Considering the India's cultural momentum, it is possible to taught them traditional music, which will help them to know about our history, and traditional ways more smoothly.
On the other hand, there are several disadvantages, first, it is not applicable to each one of us since dependent on personal life as well as family background. Secondly, each and everyone is not afford that much cost in their early age.
In conclusion, it is hardly denied that there are some wrong impressions on the student while studying music. I'm in favor of studying music in school is much important, and government should take it ahead to carry out across the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74410774411 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52747825594 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.931034482759 859% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2797582513 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159479963115 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541186060015 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405364423121 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844559964591 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024513861736 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.