In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
In this day and age, computer have become a controversial topic among people all around the world.Although imerge computer are regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people hold an opponent's view. I am inclined to highly believe that computer is the biggest achievement in the past century. In this essay I will discuss about this.
To ebgin with, there are several reasons why I support the most important invention is computer. first and foremost is that computer can survive people who suffer from incurable deseases such as AIDS. In other words, many thanks of computer which can innovate and make more complicated medical equipments which lead to more investigation and find ney way to treat patients. Secondly, it is hihgly argued that by copmuter individuals could share their idea all around te world regardless of age, sex, and social levels.
On the other hand, many people argued that compure is the enemy of people. that is to say, by machinery many treditional jobs fading away and in many contries most of young pople suffering of unenpeloyment. for example, a groups of researchers of Harvard University conducted a reserch on countries which used of computer in many componies. The result revealed that the higher machinery, the less rate of employment.
In conclusion, although most governments are againts of using computer among their soceties, I strongly believe that the advantages of computer far outwight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21544715447 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91768274984 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1513231912 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854811866793 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335505531443 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437700195491 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474168359826 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260961839283 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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