In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
In the last century, there have been quite a number of inventions such as computers, airplanes and antibiotics, which improve humans’ life significantly. In my opinion, I believe that the computer is the most imperative invention for a several reasons, which would be explained in the essay below.
There are numerous reliable grounds to support the belief that the the advent of computers plays an important role in the modern world. First and foremost, computers have a wide spectrum of application in every aspects of human’s life such as the television that we watch every day. This is true especially when it comes to scienticfic research in many fields such as medicine and engineering, which demanded a vast computational capability. Without the assistance of computers, it can be argued that human’s civilization would not have reached this far because people are unable to perform as many calculations and works as the computers do.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that computers help improve productivity. There is no doubt that computers can assist people by performing certain task on their behalf much faster and far more accurately. To give an illustration, in the field of engineering, a huge amount of time-consuming computational work has to be performed by the engineers in the old days. Thanks to the help of the computers, these daunting tasks have been accomplished in a short period of time and therefore, speed up the overall process.
In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is obvious that computers are the greatest and most important invention of human kind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23018867925 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10244222177 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4436197245 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182015840148 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694939035747 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677098684866 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120856017566 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592107137752 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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