People are moving to urban areas from rural areas foe better life. What are the advantages & Disadvantages of living in urban areas & rural areas?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. a quick reflection on typical day reveal the importance of people moving urban areas for better life from rural areas has been one of the prominent topic in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding this I would like to say my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, many people move to cities in order to have high standard of life. Lots of people are moving to cities from village for several reasons. Many people shift to city in order to achieve health facilities and improve education for children. Moreover, in village cheap accommodation are available as compare to urban accommodation. The weather of rural areas is much better as compare to urban areas and the villagers are opened minded.
On the other hand, life in city has disadvantages. The cost of living in cities is higher than rural. Increase in pollution and traffic is main problem in urban areas. Furthermore, some people do not manage their works. The life of urban areas is stressful and they have busy schedule.
In a nutshell, I believe that in rural areas the environment is more clean and pure as compared to cities and provide great opportunities for getting better education.
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| 2019-07-16 | jashan randhawa | 62 | view |
| 2019-07-16 | English time | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... people have changed more dramatically. a quick reflection on typical day reveal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95945945946 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72269259132 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7602316241 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394378173472 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123937300248 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13084341713 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243048236379 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043205509152 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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