Some people think that exercise is key to health while others feel that having balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a controversial issue that certain clans reckon that workout is more important to keep fit; however opponents argue that good food is necessary to stay fit. According to my perspective, both play equal role for the healthy body. So, I will try to explain it in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, exercises are helpful to get energy to do our daily works. For example, a person get up early in the morning then he go to walk, so with this time of walk he can get fresh air which is pollution free with that air he can fresh his mind so he can feel energetic and active whole day. Moreover, exercises also play an eminent role to decrease obesity. Hence, it is beneficial for humanity.
On the other hand, balanced food also have an importance to keep body fit and healthy because with this food masses get all proteins, vitamins and minerals which are essential for our body. For instance, if a person has a capacity to go out then he can work out but if his body is very weak then he cannot go out for exercises, so these types of foods remove weaknesses of body and helpful to make new cells.
To sum up with, health is a main issue for every country but it can be maintain if people will become aware about both exercises and balanced diets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45064377682 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40574689397 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8126831795 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838879221885 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361165664762 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404694729589 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628344457885 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448325900765 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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