As people become increasingly more dependent on motor cars, the public transport systems tend to run down. This has serious consequences for both existing community and new communities, which are spreading farther and farther from town centers. Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Recently, people's dependency to motor cars in regards to running down public transport has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the consequences of it?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the economy standpoint, motor cars are bound up inextricably with engine fuel, which indicates they lead to both air pollution and environmental hazard. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between civilization and city expansion as well as an exponential increase in density population. Their academic criticism was impressive. consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of urbanization is correlated positively with not only rural region but also community.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, citizenship migration attribute to more facilities, in that it would come down to public transport, rail road, and transportation speed. A salient example of such attribution is job opportunities, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take remote residence for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint carbon dioxide emission problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to modern community, helmet life style, and even private transport. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government investment.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that more consideration and measurements must be taken into account. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78125 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21615321355 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 139.433497537 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715277777778 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0610901692 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161785031578 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434541580889 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529687354059 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881907756453 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488572423049 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 55.0591133005 207% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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