In recent years, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the role of personal development in the professional growth to attain success across the world, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. In this essay, I will elaborate people's accomplishments in the career are largely attributed to the unique personal characteristics.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why personal attributes play an instrumental role in the life to achieve success. At first, the most conspicuous one is that to reach new heights with meticulous efforts in the life, one needs a strong desire which acts as support pillar in any adverse condition and that makes their journey towards goad smoother. Not only has the self-motivation a profound effect on the individuals in the life, but surrounding in the childhood also equip him with unique characteristics which are immensely important in the life, Thus, needless to say, all these personal disciplines will keep him in a preponderant position.
However, another pivotal facet of the arguments is that although an array of attributes such as discipline, desire and uphill struggles in a person to reach a goal are of paramount significance, the arduous conditions like lack of basic facilities and poverty in the region empower a person to work harder towards improvement in it; for instance, Dhirubhai Ambani, a prominent businessman from a backward region in India, developed enormous infrastructures in his native place which is a first smart village in India with all the cutting-edge technologies. Hence it is apparent why some prodigies advocate that the region rather than the personal growth is immensely important to achieve heights in the life.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that the inevitable effects of the personal maturity are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...with all the cutting-edge technologies. Hence it is apparent why some prodigies advoc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29568106312 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17292967128 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.070352334 50.4703680194 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.25 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.9669160288 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138245105082 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579368645066 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291965789057 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847243915198 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328524304642 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.1260098522 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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