Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that personal development is the key to enhance professional skills and career perspectives. Critics, however claim that personal development is not the major factor to deal with professional development and some other major contributory factors play a vital role to make person more strong professionally. I, personally believe that former idea is more realistic and worth to believe.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with personal and professional developmental relations. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that personal stability is mandatory to achieve good results in professional career. For instance, according to the recent research from the department of human psychology that person’s stability is the major contributing factor to enhance his professional skills. In this way, this statement alone is sufficient to favor my view point.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that the organized nature and attitude of person helps him in persueing his career in more better and polished way. Moreover, this is the ability to control behavior in appropriate way and to gain fruitful result in professional life.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that personal development is not only suitable for professional career but also mandatory for achievement of peaceful life. Thus, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64069264069 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11418233157 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.840406456 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274488210842 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976587891968 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761523988338 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161688525128 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606526686695 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.