Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is development which based on professional development. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and l will explain why in this essay.

There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that personal development can not only contribute to gaining experience in one's career, but also lead to numerous other benefits in professional life. Thanks to the wide range cf advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of this personal progress.

In view of the arquments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of personal development in proving a better platform for a professional career are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nly contribute to gaining experience in ones career, but also lead to numerous other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03361344538 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9760477804 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.473494744 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223389255448 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832582838565 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891514371068 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144657428421 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633447143938 0.0609392437508 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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