There is an ongoing debate about the professional development is depend on personal development. Some people delieve that professional development is highly depend on personal growth whereas others thing that contradictory. I am of the strong opinion that this apprehention is warranted and may serious consideration. In this essay I shall outline the reasons of my belief.
There is deluge arguments in favor of my stance. The most prepondarant one is that many qulity of personal life is help to professional life. Not only personal qulity help to time mangement in professional life but alsoit gives proper descipline. For example, Person is very patient then this qulity help professionally like that person handle him professional life very calmly in under pressure.
Another pivotal aspect of my argument is that if personal life is balance then people work happily in their office. So it is very clear thatpersonal life balance is very important thing. For instance, No one family member of Deepika Padukonein film industry but because of her parent support she is become super star of film industry.
In the view of argument above,one can conclude that personal growth helps in almost all field and so personal development is the base of professional development and advancing in ones career.
- Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
- Should University penalize students for late submission of their work? 80
- Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26794258373 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98219343997 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7383805519 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265141857293 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926285619139 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102239743077 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17818836026 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111176839019 0.0609392437508 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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