Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has long been a subject of discussion whether personal development is important in one's career or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention and I will explain why using pertinent arguments.
My viewpoint has a myriad of arguments. The most perceptible, to start with, lie in the fact that majority of assertions based on unbiased figures obtained from local and global sources. Not only does it reveal some astonishing figures that prove the point of personal development is essential for professional development and advancing, but it also encourages one to consider more details down the track. It gives a transparent and logical reasoning to the people of today's world about importance of personal development. For example, my neighbor in Pakistan, he develop his own abilities before start his own business and he succeeded. Self-evidently all these viewpoints stand personal development in good stead, as for as people concerned.
Another vital facet of the arguments is that, based on the real-time facts and figures. People are taking crucial decisions after considering all associated merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcomings, it is all up to authorities to further educate the people and allow them to take sensible decision. Therefore, it is quite evident that many are in favor of my viewpoint.
From what has been discussed, one can conclude that the benefits of the personal developments indeed too great to ignore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...er personal development is important in ones career or not. In my opinion, the forme...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'develops'.
Suggestion: develops
...or example, my neighbor in Pakistan, he develop his own abilities before start his own ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, therefore, as for, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27731092437 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98155950055 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6429102532 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253616489568 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762412158026 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875478120278 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14296987866 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793724340092 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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