Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's era, personal development is as paramount as professional growth and undeniably it makes a foundation for career development. It is believed by many that individual's personal growth is the base for one's professional development also. This essay will discuss the reasons how the personal development of individuals lead to their professional as well as career progress.
At the very outset, there do exist the reasons that support that the development of one's personal traits prepare the foundation of that individual's career. More specifically, if a person is more zealous in developing his personal traits for example, if someone has learned to be punctual since his childhood, then it will be with his throughout his lifetime and it will also be helping him on his professional front foot in being punctual for his professional work. Thus, the personal quality of oneself always cement the base for one's professional growth.
Furthermore, people start learning several aspects of life since the early ages which leads to develop later on in one's professional life. An environment plays a crucial role in building one's characteristics. For instance, an individual's bringing up in a poor society, may equip him with hard work and loyalty towards his work to fulfill his dreams because he has seen poverty around him. In this way, that hard work will go along with him in his professional life as well to get excel in his career.
This essay has discussed how the personal growth makes the foundation strong for individual's professional development. To my way of opinion, I strongly believe that personal development always good for career growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... base for ones professional development also. This essay will discuss the reasons ho...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... his throughout his lifetime and it will also be helping him on his professional ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19330855019 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01671430891 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4424908817 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306965338594 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153379613456 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088377736923 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223132786092 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905437236517 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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