Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree?

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Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree?

Surely ,there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals important role play personal development in economy has been the one of prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some conflicting views on this. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that personal development can not only contribute to professional development. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much case efficacy and convenience needless to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as for argument their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the before mentioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one think and excel in varied areas .Besides, only when one follows such a systems can they broaden their horizons thus learning .Such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as a perseverance .Hence ,it is apparent why many are in favor of professional development .
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of personal development are indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, thus, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13502109705 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91088846602 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.834707297 50.4703680194 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.7 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112015354805 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475702760079 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07136605716 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686070143507 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229668861696 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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