Places where one grows up play a key role in one’s success. Write about a person who got accomplishments because of the place s/he grew up in. OR Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
In this the and day, the key role of success has become an onging long running dispute among people all aroud the world. many social actovist believe that the place where people grow up is play a pivotal role to get accomplisment. while opponenrs have opise view, so I highly believe that many other factors have more powerful effect for gaining successful.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I support that a neighbourhood where people born and wrow up has not important effect to gain accomplishments. First and foremost is that, the more hard-working and preseverence are the key factors for going up the ladder of the successful. Secondly, the way of upbringing the children is very important, so parents play an important role to hlep offsprings to be successful. Thus, the place of people grown up is not very important.
On the other hand, there are several examples to mention that many elites have born and grow up in good neighbourhood. for example, my cousin was born in Australi and know he was a ver famous lawyer whereas I was born in Iran and I am not successful and satisfy of my life. The places were people born can paved the way to put children in an appropriate way to do not waste their time and just focuse on their goals.
In conclusion, although there are several reasons that I mentioned above that places where people born and grown up play a pivotal role, In my openion other factors are much more important to got accomplishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70656370656 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71709899955 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.507419781 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215056371463 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936648515705 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653841818404 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142385882415 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338202186617 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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