One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people getting accomplishments because of the place he grew up. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that places where one grows up play a vital role in their success depending on the situation and circumstances. In fact, not only can the native region give them an opportunity to thrive and flourish in the given environment, but they can also be aware of the condition of the society. Similarly, we can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that the person who grew up in rural areas having financial hardship tend to know the importance of money. Needless to say, all these benefits stand people in good stead as far as gaining success depending on circumstances is concerned.
Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that people knowing the complexity of growing in such rural and undeveloped areas tries to achieve something good in life more seriously than compared to people from urban areas. Besides, they value education more than anyone else. For example, there is a good deal of research by various governmental bodies that shows the most of the successful political leaders had an underprivileged life when they were young.Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the fact that native regions play a vital role in one's success.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the merits of the native regions in gaining accomplishment are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85234899329 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84585917841 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.097248513 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.454545455 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299077074775 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956157320294 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869286371642 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165099211579 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411341810689 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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