Playing games is fun only when you win. do you agree or disagree with the statement.
The importance of playing games which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational.This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impacts of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that when we play the games and win so we feel happiness and positive attitude. Lastly after win the games create leadership quality .which is very helpful their future. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Explaining my viewpoint, there are some merits but one of the crucial effects is that later win the games we get encourage ,which is very beneficial for next performance. for instance, some athlete player win semifinal match after that audience give appreciate their performance, he also give best performance for next match.
according to arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefit of their future because after win games we get leadership quality,positive attitude which is very helpful their upcoming time are indeed too great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28444444444 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80681357933 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0429686251 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.111111111 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11065862656 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470118959967 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04071975678 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678273873858 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310064026296 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.