The impact of polygamy on divorce which was always debatable has now become more controversial. It can be agreed upon the fact that polygamy led to massive divorce rate across the globe has some favorable arguments in favor of it, however, there has always been some contention about it. This essay will elaborate on how polygamy causes divorce and how regulatory authority and law can be a solution and thus will lead to a reasoned conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons that polygamy leads to increase in divorce rate but the most important one lies from the fact that people are spending less time with family due to polygamy as there is more than one family to take care which ends with divorce. For instance, a study conducted in this area revealed that people who have more than one marriages have ended with divorce as compared to others. Thus due to this reason, it can be said that polygamy has led to the massive divorce rate.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that this problem can be addressed by government agencies as there are many reasons but the most important one stems from the fact that government should implement strict law against the multiple marriages such as in Hindu religion more than one marriage are not allowed at same time which need to be implemented globally. Thus due to this reason, it can be said that strong rules against the polygamy can be the solution for the massive divorce rate globally.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that impacts of polygamy on massive divorce rate are prominent, however, it can be addressed by strict laws and regulations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one marriage', 'a marriage', or simply 'marriages'?
Suggestion: one marriage; a marriage; marriages
...revealed that people who have more than one marriages have ended with divorce as compared to ...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ded with divorce as compared to others. Thus due to this reason, it can be said that...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... which need to be implemented globally. Thus due to this reason, it can be said that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78819444444 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4618006582 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475694444444 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8645800094 50.4703680194 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.222222222 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156635608094 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859018326646 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047256381923 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111617606316 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00839018823738 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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