It is impossible to deny the fact that poor lifestyles have a negative impact on people’s health today, however, whether government should invest funds to provide services to improve people’s health has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by some that people are responsible for their poor lifestyles, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a number of individuals. In my opinion, lack of exercises, irregular sleep pattern and overtime work are the major reasons impact people’s health, and I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, irregular sleep pattern is one of the most obvious problems which majority of students and workers are facing today. It will lead to a series of health problems, such as increase in the risk of cardiovascular diseases, psychological problems and shortened life expectancy. For instance, a research conducted by University of New South Wales on final undergraduate students explored that 62% had suffered from some sort of anxiety and constant tiredness contributed from late night sleep. Hence, government should step in and encourage students to have eight to ten hours of sleep every night.
Furthermore, lack of exercises and overtime work had both lead to impaired eyesight and overweight, which can cause long term health issues. Since majority of works required use of computers and indoor meetings, researchers had found an increased trend of short eyesight among young professionals and students. Therefore, poor work cycle and lack of exercise need to be corrected by government introducing laws on the minimum wedge and the maximum working hours, as well as building sports facilities.
In conclusion, poor lifestyles contribute to increase risk of getting sick physically and mentally. Government shall create laws to enhance people’s health and provide health check services to keep track of people’s health status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54026845638 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03254162788 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4682537688 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.583333333 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288625463934 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097249778842 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112278542799 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186293421588 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141927845427 0.0609392437508 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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