As populations around the world grow older, the cost of healthcare for the elderly is rising. Governments are increasingly finding it difficult to bear the cost of healthcare of these increasing numbers. Even their families are not able to take good care of their elderly relatives.
What is your opinion and what are your suggestions to tackle the problem?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In today era population rate is surging and health status of elderly individuals are almost deteriorating. This thing create problem in managing the cost of health for elder people for government because their family are not able to take care of them. I completly agree with statement and going to explain my view in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, I admit that health become major issue in present time even local bodies take lots of afforts to preserve health at optimum level and for example government provide every medicine to elder free of cost. The family of elderly are even not able to spend money for their treatment. Additionally, there is need to regulate the population growth so that this problem can not be faced in future because large families are felling it difficult to give high cost treatment to their elder one.
Further reinforcing my views, I want to say that there is need to provide awareness to new generation so that can not face with this situation in coming years because providing highly costly medicines and treatment is not esay and affordable for every one for example radiotheray, chemotherapy for cancer is not cheap treatment. Lastly, people can also maintain their health status by adopting healthy lifestyle so that risk of major health problems can be declined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99086757991 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60462160597 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1545166115 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.625 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222606496876 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11451154259 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914871053714 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172596543118 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773490999163 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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