Does a certain type of music effect's young learning agree or disagree?
In the recent scenario,music is present in a variety of social and educational activities. Although, it is benefited minors in plethora of way but some people are anxious about it's adverse effect. According to my prospective, I deem that music can effect's young learning skills and i agree with the statement.
Highlighting its advantages, the primary one which is worth mentioning is that remember things are improved by musical ability, and it makes sense that learning music can help with learning math because music has many Mathematical applications, and can make a math lesson a real life need, instead of useless information. Above all this, one more factor which adds in to it's popularity among today's generation, due to lots of burden and busiest schedule of study student's are involving into health diseases for instance, Depression, stress, health issue, not proper growth so i reckon that with the help of music pupils can feel relax and more energetic.
Another conducive idea's striking in my mind is that there are ample of musical activities are performing in schools and collages for example, instrumental activities just like guitar, piano and so on. If individual have a dream to become a famous director of music or famous artist then these may help them to fulfill their dreams. Apart from this, another pros of music is that student can learn about different languages because various songs are sang by famous artist from different corner of the world.
summarize the whole content, I reiterate my opinion that music present very crucial role in every student even though in every people life.
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Comments
hello sir how many i can get
hello sir how many i can get through this topic in ielts.
around 7.0 out of 9. There
around 7.0 out of 9. There are some grammatical errors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , music
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...makes sense that learning music can help with learning math because music has man...
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...math because music has many Mathematical applications, and can make a math lesson...
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...udent even though in every people life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09022556391 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68596854878 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.954768467 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.444444444 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174453087054 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732920851838 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815401240953 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102363787302 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596227091181 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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