prisons should be helping convicts to obtain skills that allow them to re enter society as productive citizens. To what extent do you agree with this statement?support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience or observation.
Crime rate has increased largely in all over the world.Jail may aid inmate to change character when they come out of prison but I disagree with this statement rather putting convicts in the cell,can give them social work in the society with security.
On the set,if bench have given a life sentence for person who has committed in preliminary crime.They may have choice to become a good citizen but they would have obtain more criminal contact when they have merged with other offenders in the same cell.Moreover,they may do more crime when they come out of prison.Furthermore,even some inmate hand over some money to police personnel for release.So,the prison is not the complete place for criminals who have done more crimes.
To ahead,rather putting them in the jail,the court has to give alternative conviction like sent them to retire judge house for gardening work or force them do social works with police force.Even the cost of criminal can be minimized and by under the control of judiciary they may chances to evolve their character in the better manner also the conduct of criminals can be confined.
To recap, jail may the right place for inmates who have done minor crimes.Ultimately,those who committ big crimes,court has to give social responsibility with security only then they can be a productive citizen rather than putting them in prison.
- Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.To what extent do you agree with this definition of scuccess should take in to consideration? 11
- The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming? 77
- Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.To what extent do you agree with this definition of scuccess should take in to consideration? 11
- prisons should be helping convicts to obtain skills that allow them to re enter society as productive citizens To what extent do you agree with this statement support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience or observation 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14666666667 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.5024630542 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3077748679 50.4703680194 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 285.75 104.977214359 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.25 20.9669160288 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.25397266985 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131299512378 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979766144178 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040754952151 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979766144178 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040754952151 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 12.6369458128 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 53.1260098522 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.9458128079 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.94827586207 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.3980295567 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.