The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming?
Global warming is becoming outrage all over the world in this modern world.The forest completely have filled with conceret buidings by goverment and private organisation.This essay discuses the impact of pollution and it encounter the problems in the following paragraph.
To begin with,most private firms have destroyed the forest with government approval for industralization to provide job for people who don not have employment so that environment become pollute severly in most of countries.In addition to that farmer demolised forest trees where are doing agriculture because of this annual rainfall has dropped down for long time so that our earth become more heat wave in all the season,if it goes for longer tenure.All country will face disaster.
On the other hand,there are many way to eradicate global warming.Firstly,the government should give notice to private sector for logging.Secondly,all the school.hospital and indutry relocated in the outskrit area rather than they be at centre of city only then we can deviate the pollution from atmosphere because most of companies not constracted in single place so the pollution not be flewed in equall order.The government encourage people to plant sappling in their home.Furthermore,the government bring a free vehicle day in cities monthly once.
In conclusion,the forest has power to save from catalyst ,if we destroyed for people conventient then we will be under threat of natural clamity.Ultimately,it is our duty to protaect forest from deforestation only then we can confine global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56066945607 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47117469498 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.5024630542 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.42718275 50.4703680194 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 332.25 104.977214359 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 20.9669160288 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.25397266985 417% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190373457281 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115588709827 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489219202963 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115588709827 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489219202963 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 12.6369458128 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 53.1260098522 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.9458128079 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.94827586207 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.3980295567 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.