Producing clean energy is an impossible goal. Instead, we need to focus on reducing energy consumption.
How far do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support our point of view with justification and example.
The energy consumption is an important goal, there are two types of energy natural and manmade energy. From this energy electricity produced and supply for various purpose.
In manmade energy which always cause pollution to atmosphere it affects all living organism life such energy is thermal and nuclear. In other hand natural energy which does not affects the environment such energy is wind, hydro, solar.
However, the population of human being dramatically increased in world, so that the usage of natural energy is not possible because it producing less amount of energy than manmade.
United Nation announced in international conference to consumption energy which help to protect climate changes, but the possibility is not suit for developing country because the cost of production is higher. Although developed countries such as USA are focusing more in renewal energy production from 2006.
As these days the global warming and fuel shortage are getting more and more serious time. Renewable and clean energy are the main idea solution to energy problem.
In conclusion, clean energy production can curtail other fossil energy production and maintain sustainability development, the consumption of energy is possible when developed countries help to developing countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: affect
...ther hand natural energy which does not affects the environment such energy is wind, hy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58673469388 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77642448177 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1065255031 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20864053548 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102081995782 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507975607342 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122189606008 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043174046925 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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