Professional workers like doctors,nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.To what extent you agree or disagree?
Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. In this essay I discuss what I mean in more details.
doctors, nurses and teachers play a tremendous role in helping societies develop and become more progressive. doctors and nurses help sick people become healthier, which results in that those people become more productive and hence better work outcomes are obtained. While teachers help people have a broader mind which results in having a society full of scientitsts and discoverers who make discoveries which help in the progress of any society. On the other hand sport and entertainment personalities play an unimportant role in making stressed people have a plenty of spare time for having fun and laugh, and of course those acts will not help any country achieve a better position beween different countries worlwide.
Moreover, people who work in the medical field help in the growth of the tourism business, and this is because many tourists from different countries are encouraged to visit a country which is progressed in the field of medicine, because they will feel more safe. Also a country with a successful education may encourage many businessmen to send their sons to learn in those countries’ colleges, which in turn will boost the economy of that country.
In the end after the mentioned examples, there is no doubt to prove that doctors and nurses must take more salaries than any other people in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Doctors
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Suggestion: Doctors
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, i mean, no doubt, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15354330709 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81036461981 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0674863336 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.444444444 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254534077872 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143626484116 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231343121512 0.071462118173 324% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218443647094 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263341309309 0.0609392437508 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.