Pros and cons of adventures sports/dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bunjee jumping etc. and weather u support them or not.
Nowadays, Extreme sports are gaining popularity among people. While some people believe that these sports are advantageous to us, others stand against this notion stating that it is of no use but a serious threat to our life. In my opinion, while adventurous sports may be beneficial to some extent, it can be dangerous too.
There are numerous reasons for some people to support these games and the imperative one is that the immense pleasure they get from it. These kinds of games are predominantly placed in highest points, for example, mountains so that it can be excited. In addition, when people engage in these rushing games, it might not only give mental pressures to finish the game, but also to push people to the edge of their life to handle it. As a result of all these, people can feel accomplished and gain confidence to handle other difficulties later in their real life.
On the other hand, some people opine that extreme sports are hazardous. These games should usually have appropriate equipment and significant safety measures in place. However, sometimes it lacks these facilities. For example, the reports based on some real incidences proved that because of cheap equipment and negligence in most of the places, many ignorant people risked their life to death. As a consequence, individuals are affected adversely both physically and emotionally.
In conclusion, though extreme sports can be beneficial in many ways, such as building confidence, however, I profoundly believe that the potential drawbacks of it outweigh the pros as it threatens our life. Therefore, I would suggest not encouraging this phenomenon for our life safety.
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...ersely both physically and emotionally. In conclusion, though extreme sports can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15498154982 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74843599341 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.865670882 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814927249613 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032828776775 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435927789563 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580888836754 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399607336313 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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